Post by Waterstar on Apr 30, 2018 15:37:27 GMT
OK so Rainstorm inspired me to make a fanfic because I really liked the one they made. This one is going to be a bit more realistic than their one though...
*Disclaimer*
This story was taken place a few moons after RTI
*Another Disclaimer*
Pigeonfeather (will be mentioned in this Chapter) was the kittypet that the player controls. He was my OC.
Koolkit opened his eyes.
"Duskheart, look! He opened his eyes!" Nettleclaw exclaimed
"He looks so much better with his eyes open," Duskheart said.
Koolkit couldn't hear what his parents were saying as they went on to his siblings.
"I have the best parents ever," He thought
*Disclaimer*
This story was taken place a few moons after RTI
*Another Disclaimer*
Pigeonfeather (will be mentioned in this Chapter) was the kittypet that the player controls. He was my OC.
Chapter 1
Koolkit opened his eyes.
"Duskheart, look! He opened his eyes!" Nettleclaw exclaimed
"He looks so much better with his eyes open," Duskheart said.
Koolkit couldn't hear what his parents were saying as they went on to his siblings.
"I have the best parents ever," He thought
5 and a bit moons later
"Koolkit" Foxstar called,
"You have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Koolpaw."
Foxstar looked around the clearing.
"Your mentor will be Eagleshine. I hope Eagleshine can pass on all he knows to you."
The clearing errupted in roars.
"Koolpaw, Stripepaw, Fallowpaw!"
Koolpaw walked up to his parents.
"I am very proud of you and your littermates," Nettleclaw said. Duskheart nodded in agreement.
"Koolpaw," Eagleshine called, "Get over here."
When Koolpaw arrived, he could see his littermates, Stripepaw and Fallowpaw, with both their mentors, Nightchaser and Kestrelsong.
Fallowpaw is so lucky, Koolpaw thought, He gets to have a senior warrior as a mentor.
Koolpaw looked at Kestrelsong. He had heard about all the stories about Kestrelsong needing to go to the Medicine den. His sister, Badgerfang, had taken the path of a medicine cat because she feared that her brother would gain an illness. At least thats what his littermates said.
"Ok everyone? Lets go," Kestrelsong said.
Koolpaw looked at him in confusion.
"What are we doing?" He asked Eagleshine.
Eagleshine looked at his apprentice in dismay.
"Did you not listen to Kestrelsong? We are going to tour the territory. Quick, they're about to leave."
Koolpaw ran to the patrol.
"Hey Koolpaw," Stripepaw called, "Do you think we'll find the same fox that killed Blackheart, Pigeonfeather and Briarstar?"
Koolpaw looked at his brother with a worried look.
"We might won't we?"
Fallowpaw came into the conversation.
"Come on Koolpaw. Don't listen to Stripepaw. He's got bee's in his brain. Lets get onto the patrol."
Koolpaw stared as his sister put him to relief.
The patrol got on with the tour. When they got to the Windclan border, Koolpaw could smell something strange. While no one was looking, he went to check it out. He saw nothing, but he knew he could smell something bad. Eagleshine walked behind Koolpaw.
"What are you doing?" Eagleshine called.
Koolpaw signaled Eagleshine to be quiet. He snuck up closer to the smell. Then, he saw something that could change the fate for his whole clan.
"You have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Koolpaw."
Foxstar looked around the clearing.
"Your mentor will be Eagleshine. I hope Eagleshine can pass on all he knows to you."
The clearing errupted in roars.
"Koolpaw, Stripepaw, Fallowpaw!"
Koolpaw walked up to his parents.
"I am very proud of you and your littermates," Nettleclaw said. Duskheart nodded in agreement.
"Koolpaw," Eagleshine called, "Get over here."
When Koolpaw arrived, he could see his littermates, Stripepaw and Fallowpaw, with both their mentors, Nightchaser and Kestrelsong.
Fallowpaw is so lucky, Koolpaw thought, He gets to have a senior warrior as a mentor.
Koolpaw looked at Kestrelsong. He had heard about all the stories about Kestrelsong needing to go to the Medicine den. His sister, Badgerfang, had taken the path of a medicine cat because she feared that her brother would gain an illness. At least thats what his littermates said.
"Ok everyone? Lets go," Kestrelsong said.
Koolpaw looked at him in confusion.
"What are we doing?" He asked Eagleshine.
Eagleshine looked at his apprentice in dismay.
"Did you not listen to Kestrelsong? We are going to tour the territory. Quick, they're about to leave."
Koolpaw ran to the patrol.
"Hey Koolpaw," Stripepaw called, "Do you think we'll find the same fox that killed Blackheart, Pigeonfeather and Briarstar?"
Koolpaw looked at his brother with a worried look.
"We might won't we?"
Fallowpaw came into the conversation.
"Come on Koolpaw. Don't listen to Stripepaw. He's got bee's in his brain. Lets get onto the patrol."
Koolpaw stared as his sister put him to relief.
The patrol got on with the tour. When they got to the Windclan border, Koolpaw could smell something strange. While no one was looking, he went to check it out. He saw nothing, but he knew he could smell something bad. Eagleshine walked behind Koolpaw.
"What are you doing?" Eagleshine called.
Koolpaw signaled Eagleshine to be quiet. He snuck up closer to the smell. Then, he saw something that could change the fate for his whole clan.