Post by Impy10 on Aug 17, 2020 10:02:12 GMT
This is going to be me explaining his backstory and how he got into ThunderClan, then I'll explain his attributes.
Smokeyhawk (Smokey at the time) was born to Scout and Sky (Yes, I know. Cattails.) and had a sister named Silver (Later Silverstripe). He heard stories about the clans, but they were not pleasant ones. His grandmother, Tinytail, was a rouge, who left the clans out of resentment for her mothers death, so she had a bad view on the clans (This is Untold Tales, btw). She passed these views onto Sky, and he passed them on to Smokey and Silver. On a battle mission with his father, the Mystic Colney cats ambushed them and went for Smokey. Instead of attacking, which he was fully able to do, he stood there, cowardly. His father had to step in and was killed just as a patrol came and drove the intruders off. After hearing the news, Silver said that she was leaving. She offered for Smokey to go with her, but he turned her down. He was strong, but a horrible hunter and fighter, since he had no proper training. His colony hated him for this and belittled him. His own father (Scout) was ashamed of him.
A few weeks later, he found a portal (Don't question it, they're just apart of my universe). He was sick of being belittled, and he wanted to start over, so he jumped into the portal. He found himself near a two-leg place and met Mikan. The latter lived in the outskirts of the town, and he guided Smokey through the place. They became fast friends. He finally felt happy.
Until he meet Brute.
Now, Smokey was fine with taking orders, as long as it benefited him in some way. But Brute was telling him to leave, and Smokey didn't like that. The first scene with your character in it was this confrontation.
When he came to ThunderClan and was named Smokeypaw, he wanted to be friends with Duskpaw. However, their personalities clashed, and Smokeypaw didn't agree with Duskpaw's methods of dealing with situations.
At first, him and Thrushfeather got along. But she was very mean when it came to training and punished him even for the smallest of mistakes. He started resenting her and her views, completely disagreeing on everything she said when it came to the war.
He didn't want the war because he didn't think he would be able to fight in it. He could barely fight off Brute, much less a storm of fully trained warriors.
He gave Badgerpaw one of his mice to please her mentor and she was incredibly grateful. She suggested that they find Kestralpaw to cheer him up, but The couldn't find him anywhere.
After he and Badgerpaw became close friends, he wanted to tell her about his life before being a kittypet, but he was reminded that his mentor told him to come to the ShadowClan border, saying that ShadowClan might be there. He has a crush on Badgerfang, but doesn't want to tell it just yet.
He befriended Badgerpaw
He befriended the elders
He is a confirmed liar
Here are his traits:
Chaste, Energetic, Forgiving, Generous, Deceitful, Honourable, Kind, Modest, Wise, Greedy, Naïve, Brave
Appearance:
Light grey tom with darker paws. Has dark brown and ginger stripes and a ginger (left) and dark brown (right) ears. He also has a brown tail.
Pictures (I need to get the actual (aka what he properly looks like) pic):
Smokeyhawk (Smokey at the time) was born to Scout and Sky (Yes, I know. Cattails.) and had a sister named Silver (Later Silverstripe). He heard stories about the clans, but they were not pleasant ones. His grandmother, Tinytail, was a rouge, who left the clans out of resentment for her mothers death, so she had a bad view on the clans (This is Untold Tales, btw). She passed these views onto Sky, and he passed them on to Smokey and Silver. On a battle mission with his father, the Mystic Colney cats ambushed them and went for Smokey. Instead of attacking, which he was fully able to do, he stood there, cowardly. His father had to step in and was killed just as a patrol came and drove the intruders off. After hearing the news, Silver said that she was leaving. She offered for Smokey to go with her, but he turned her down. He was strong, but a horrible hunter and fighter, since he had no proper training. His colony hated him for this and belittled him. His own father (Scout) was ashamed of him.
A few weeks later, he found a portal (Don't question it, they're just apart of my universe). He was sick of being belittled, and he wanted to start over, so he jumped into the portal. He found himself near a two-leg place and met Mikan. The latter lived in the outskirts of the town, and he guided Smokey through the place. They became fast friends. He finally felt happy.
Until he meet Brute.
Now, Smokey was fine with taking orders, as long as it benefited him in some way. But Brute was telling him to leave, and Smokey didn't like that. The first scene with your character in it was this confrontation.
When he came to ThunderClan and was named Smokeypaw, he wanted to be friends with Duskpaw. However, their personalities clashed, and Smokeypaw didn't agree with Duskpaw's methods of dealing with situations.
At first, him and Thrushfeather got along. But she was very mean when it came to training and punished him even for the smallest of mistakes. He started resenting her and her views, completely disagreeing on everything she said when it came to the war.
He didn't want the war because he didn't think he would be able to fight in it. He could barely fight off Brute, much less a storm of fully trained warriors.
He gave Badgerpaw one of his mice to please her mentor and she was incredibly grateful. She suggested that they find Kestralpaw to cheer him up, but The couldn't find him anywhere.
After he and Badgerpaw became close friends, he wanted to tell her about his life before being a kittypet, but he was reminded that his mentor told him to come to the ShadowClan border, saying that ShadowClan might be there. He has a crush on Badgerfang, but doesn't want to tell it just yet.
He befriended Badgerpaw
He befriended the elders
He is a confirmed liar
Here are his traits:
Chaste, Energetic, Forgiving, Generous, Deceitful, Honourable, Kind, Modest, Wise, Greedy, Naïve, Brave
Appearance:
Light grey tom with darker paws. Has dark brown and ginger stripes and a ginger (left) and dark brown (right) ears. He also has a brown tail.
Pictures (I need to get the actual (aka what he properly looks like) pic):