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Post by Leonard on May 5, 2017 13:51:11 GMT
Please report any text problems (typos, grammar issues, misspellings) here.
Please provide the information where the text problem can be found in Your post.
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Post by Guest on May 5, 2017 22:40:25 GMT
In one part of the scene where you get exiled, Briarstar calls you Snowpaw, no matter what you named yourself.
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Post by firepelt on May 5, 2017 22:45:45 GMT
In the part of the game, when Thrushfeather is showing you the territory, right after you defeat the strange cat, There is a text error in Thrushfeathers dialogue.
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Post by Leonard on May 5, 2017 23:47:38 GMT
Thanks for reports, fixed.
I hope Snowpaw will finally rest in peace.
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Post by TheCommonStray on May 5, 2017 23:51:49 GMT
Snowpaw is like Heavystep. They're immortal and will just keep popping up
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Post by Crimsonbird on May 6, 2017 7:09:54 GMT
Hey Leo. I found another one! In A New Legend Begins, if you picked the "He repeatedly killed Clan leaders" option when Badgerpaw asks you about what the villain did to reveal that he was a great threat to the Clans, then she will say "But! A Clan leader is more vulnerable after losing a life." twice when telling the story.
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Post by troubledspar7an on May 13, 2017 16:34:47 GMT
As I wrote the skills section for the wiki, here's typos I came across: Note: This was done on Patch v1.02
Eviscerate: "Makes a mousemeat [out?] of enemy. Battle Trance: "Continuo[.u]sly gives energy to fight." Marking Strike: "A moderately strong attack[delete ','] which lowers the enemy['s] defense for a few turns." Fox Stance: "An opportunistic stance[delete ','] that relies on seeking an opening." Bear [.s]tance: "Recovers [HP] each turn. Berserker's Stance: "Greatly increases damage [you] deal and receive.
Edit: Put periods in the s and u to prevent accidentally causing BBCode to recognize that as Underline and Strike-through syntax
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Post by Leonard on May 13, 2017 16:46:03 GMT
Thanks, all fixed!
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Post by One&Only on May 13, 2017 19:37:08 GMT
These are the text errors I've found as of patch 1.04d While touring the camp with Thrushfeather, she states "Brairstar reside here. You probably shouldn't visit him, unless there is an urgent matter, or he is invites you." There isn't suppose to be an 'is' between he and invites, so its "or he invites you." When you ask Thrushfeather to explain the Clan ranks, she said, "When leader dies, the deputy succeeds him." I believe its meant to be "When THE leader dies" When you leave camp to tour the territory, your mentor says "But I want you to show our border first." Next, I notced when you first visit Sky Oak Thrushfeather says "This is our primiary hunting ground" twice. When she talks about battles with ShadowClan, she states, "Thankfully that didn't happen in a while", the 'didn't' should be 'hasen't.' Also, when talking with the resting patrol of Slackfur and Ravenwing, Thrushfeather says, "It seems like we can approach safely the ShadowClan border." I think approach and safely got mixed up. I'll continute playing to try and catch as many text errors as I can so we can fix em' up
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Post by Leonard on May 13, 2017 21:31:42 GMT
Thanks! That helps a lot.
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Post by One&Only on May 25, 2017 21:43:29 GMT
This is from patch 1.04d When you meet the Windclan patrol with your mentor, a cat says, "Fine as well. Is it your apprentice?" 'it' should be 'that'. When speaking with Nettlepaw on the way back to camp, she says, "I'll give you one advice. If an older warrior gives you an advice, you listen." "I'll give you some advice. If an older warrior gives you advice, you listen" would be correct. When you're back at camp and talk with Duskpaw when Nightkit is following him, he comments, "Hey, you looked bruised." Change 'looked' to 'look'. When duties are done for the 1st time, Foxclaw says "Elders are fed? Then you're off for a day." It's suppose to be 'the' day.
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Post by Leonard on May 26, 2017 13:43:46 GMT
Thanks, that's very helpful!
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Post by ✨ ωιѕт ✨ on May 26, 2017 22:16:56 GMT
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Post by ✨ ωιѕт ✨ on May 26, 2017 22:53:51 GMT
A few more:
During the gathering, Splashstar says "Blood of our ancestors flows stronger than ever." I thought the word "The" would make the sentence sound better if it was placed at the beginning.
Stormstar says, "Silverdrop, has taken an apprentice, Cinderpaw." Either the comma could be removed or some more info could be added on: "Silverdrop, WindClan's medicine cat, has taken on an apprentice, Cinderpaw."
Oakstar says, "ShadowClan is enjoying a full fresh kill pie every day." "Pie" should be "pile."
At the end, Duskheart says, "Amberflame kits will join you soon. You won't be alone for long!" "Amberflame" should be made possessive (Amberflame's)
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Post by ✨ ωιѕт ✨ on May 26, 2017 22:56:27 GMT
OH and also, when Blackheart is naming off Pebbleskip's demands for what herbs she needs, he says she needs "chevril." It should say "chervil"
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